There are words that (most of the time) are best to be left out of or changed in your draft. So CTRL+F your draft and get into the nitty gritty!*
*what you keep or change is up to you and your writing style. :)
Would you rather someone say you’re very good or that you’re AMAZING. Changing “very ____” to one word usually hypes it up and gets the point across better. Check out my list of alternatives!
Good to keep some in 1st Person especially, but it can saturate your writing very quickly. So be careful!
Can be replaced by alternatives of “very ___” in a lot of cases. More likely to appear and seem natural in 1st Person, but you do you.
Not always the bad guy, but if you need something new, check out my alternatives for “said”!
“In order to achieve this plot…” can be “To achieve this plot…” and perform the same effect, if not more effectively.
A typically casual and informal filler word. If you don’t need it or don’t feel it fits, cut it!
Works best in dialogue, not really anywhere else.
This is pretty boring and lacks intricacy IMO. Check out my alternatives for “seemed”!
Not always a junk word, but it can be. Use your discretion.
“Utilize” is a more pretentious version of “use”. But if it’s put in a pretentious character’s dialogue/narration and the shoe fits… utilize it.
“She got bananas” is way less interesting than “she bought bananas” or “she stole bananas” or “she harvested bananas”. The word “got” cuts out an opportunity for details/characterization. Replacing it lessens repetition as well.
Shares similarities with “seemed” and “got”. It kills a chance for more detail. Check out my alternatives for “went”!
I think it's fair to give hotd shit for quite a few things, but I still think that how they chose to change Alicent's character was genius. To look at her and ask: what if she was young? What if she was scared? And then, in turn, to have this scared young girl, that was pushed into the cycle of violence and abuse that is feudalism, grow up into a scared wary woman, that doesn't stop the cycle for her children but instead pushes them into it as well, because it's the only way the world works that she knows. Because when her father pushed her into the cycle, he kissed her brow and called it duty. And now she makes her children wed each other and ursurp a throne, continuing all the abuse and violence, because she was told as a girl that if you just follow the rules enough everything will be alright.
And that's also what makes her relationship with Rhaenyra so fascinating. It's love, but it's also resentment. To Alicent Rhaenyra is free. She doesn't follow the rules, flaunts some of them openly. And still it seems like there are no consequences for her. She doesn't follow the rules and still Viserys loves her in a way he never did his children by Alicent. While Alicent breaks and reprieves herself in an attempt to do everything right, but it won't save her.
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they are so i can see you coded tbh…
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perfect angel who is the actual treasure of my heart
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i hear my heart breaking tonight do you hear it too?