Fred: We can never let anyone know that we got beat up by Ginny.
George: Agreed.
Fred: Take it to the grave?
George: To the grave.
Fred: This conversation never happened.
George: I don't even know who you are.
Fred: ...That's hurtful, you took it too far.
George: That's a weird thing for a stranger to say.
This was George. He was a 9 year old Jack Russell who lived in the small town of Manaia, New Zealand. On April 29, 2007 he jumped into a losing fight with two Pit Bulls to protect two young children. According to witnesses he fought as hard as he could, but he never stood a chance and was severely mauled as the children were pulled to safety. George died from his wounds that afternoon at the vet.
Writing advice from my uni teachers:
If your dialog feels flat, rewrite the scene pretending the characters cannot at any cost say exactly what they mean. No one says “I’m mad” but they can say it in 100 other ways.
Wrote a chapter but you dislike it? Rewrite it again from memory. That way you’re only remembering the main parts and can fill in extra details. My teacher who was a playwright literally writes every single script twice because of this.
Don’t overuse metaphors, or they lose their potency. Limit yourself.
Before you write your novel, write a page of anything from your characters POV so you can get their voice right. Do this for every main character introduced.
Historic Black and White Pictures Restored in Color
Women Delivering Ice, 1918
Times Square, 1947
Portrait Used to Design the Penny. President Lincoln Meets General McClellan – Antietam, Maryland ca September 1862
Marilyn Monroe, 1957
Newspaper boy Ned Parfett sells copies of the evening paper bearing news of Titanic’s sinking the night before. (April 16, 1912)
Easter Eggs for Hitler, c 1944-1945
Sergeant George Camblair practicing with a gas mask in a smokescreen – Fort Belvoir, Virginia, 1942
Helen Keller meeting Charlie Chaplin in 1919
Painting WWII Propaganda Posters, Port Washington, New York – 8 July 1942
Construction of the Golden Gate Bridge ca 1935
let’s treat ourselves more gently. let’s go to bed early. let’s rest when we need to. let’s live life in a way that doesn’t make you feel burnt out after a few weeks. i want us to have fun, to enjoy everyday life, to be present and not to always push ourselves to the last limit. challenge yourself but also treat yourself with love. okay?
Wanderer, there is no way, you make the way as you go... Just a wanderer enjoying the rollercoaster.
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