– Song of lost secrets
"No, boy it's not-- Youll always be my son, I just want better for you."
nothing more humiliating than misusing a word because i was remembering its etymological origin and not its contemporary meaning. like damn i guess this would've been really useful 700 years ago.
is whump the new term for angst or what ?? im starting to see writers use whump a lot nowadays, are they the same thing ?
– Song of lost secrets
“do you still feel like that? do you love me, or am I just your fascination?”
– Song of lost secrets
"Those people are out to get us. They always have, and always will. He's human, he can't love you."
– More than royalty
"Every time I see you again I feel more alone. You're always changing nowadays." "I tried to change for the better, you know, for– for you"
Picrew used, full credit to Naylissah. (moodboard here)
Role: protagonist
Name; Salem
age; 17
birthday; 14/8/1704
species; human
sexuality; gay
height; 5'10
"I didn't wanna end up like this. I'd have gone so far, I know I would've."
motivations; desire to be seen, freedom,
mannerisms; fast paced speaking, lots of questions, loud, nose scrunching, big movements, tilting his head, skipping letters
fears: drowning & dissapointment
hobbies: knife throwing, sailing, drink tasting
aggravated assault
disturbing the peace
extortion
open container
underage drinking
arson
theft
as someone with club foot, PLEASE WRITE MORE CHARACTERS WITH IT☹️ also it can be disabling, and it can affect the knees, hips, and ankles if comorbig with another condition; commonly knock-kneed. another thing though is to avoid "curled", it just sounds weird; curved is a good alternative with the same effect
A guide to writing club foot.
To understand what club foot is, you need to understand it's causes. You can't develop club foot in your life, you develop it in the womb. It can be from how you're positioned, how you develop, etc.
Club foot is the twisting of a foot in the womb. It is a birth defect.
Note: the only reason why I put "cures" in quotes is because of continued nerve damage that'll continue for the rest of your life. However, people who undergo successful treatments can live a normal life.
400 BC: Hippocrates described manipulating the foot and placing them with bandages, much like modern day treatments.
1834: The Thomas Wrench was discovered. It was used to forcibly change the position of the foot.
70s-80s-90s: This is when surgical treatments became popular. There are a lot of methods for correcting club foot, but the most popular are postero-medial release (PMR) which entails the extensive release of the contractive soft tissues of the clubbed foot/feet. Surgical treatment can give the foot a more "normal" look and ensure that the patient can walk on the foot. This does not erase any nerve pain, though, as overtime the foot can become stiff, weak, and show early arthritic changes. This is why this practice kinda fell out of practice.
The Conservative Technique:
Casting and wrapping to stretch the foot/feet and molding the bones so that it's less painful and the patient can walk on the feet/foot.
LANGUAGE:
What language do you use to describe club foot and what to avoid.
Words to Avoid:
Gross
Disgusting
Anything related to how "gross" the characters foot looks, or how the mc wants to "throw up" at the sight.
Words to Use:
Curled
Clubbed/club
AIDE:
Mobility aide is something many need as they get older, some even use it when they're younger. The list includes:
Crutches
Canes
Wheelchairs
Braces
Walker
Please let me know if you have any questions (I'll add to this post)
I really need to get back to writing consistently, but its been so much harder since my surgery. Hopefully soon
I don't think many people realize how much they've been turned into a bunch of casually cynical jerks.
Someone may come to their parents and say "I want to write a book" and their parents will say "it's really hard to get published".
Someone might confide in their sibling and say "I want to sell my art on "x" platform" and that sibling will say "do you know how many people you'd be competing with? Do you know how many shops are even on that platform?"
I know a kid who once told his best friend "I think I wanna start a dnd podcast" and the friend was like "do you know what the word "oversaturation" means?"
Personally, I don't know why any of that matters? And even if it did, perhaps your response should be "Do it! Do it and see where it goes!"
They're made out of metal. he/him🕷️2010s (active) sideblog: obscuremelodies
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