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I liked this one. Tristan's interesting, and I enjoyed his dynamic with Moonsong. I find it very interesting that he was glad to have been dragged into GM, presumably meaning to have been controlled by Khepri.
This chapter also directly states that the City is "Almost like a city in Earth Bet", and points for self-awareness I guess, but god is it boring
Internal Inconsistency Counter: 5 (+0)
Inconsistency with Worm Counter: 0, but only because the city hasn't yet been confirmed to not be New York